DarkAge

decent book... terrible ending

(3 Sterne)

teamgodlike

I can honestly say that I loved the idea behind the story. I have had many daydreams of assuming the persona of many of my characters and traveling through the mystical realms. However, I am disappointed with quite a few issues with your novel and oration of it. If one can ignore the lack of fluidity in the dialog between the characters, and frequently mispronounced words it makes for an enjoyable experience. but the voices you used for the characters was often annoying and hard to understand. I would like to see a better written sequel because you do have talent, but you need to focus more on your dialog and pronunciation of fairly easy words.

meh

(2 Sterne)

TheNeighSayer

I don't know what's worse, the character James' vocalization or the narrator's horrific inability to pronounce words correctly. Honestly I'm climbing walls here. The story starts off with a group of people that seem designed more to cover all sorts of social and ethnic types rather than being actual characters. The subject itself is something like many tabletop RPGers think about from time to time, and is in fact the same base plot seen in many young budding authors (not an actual complaint but there's a lot of 'been there done that'). The game session at the beginning was tedious. If that's how this guy plays tabletop keep me out. 1 star for decent production, second star because he actually put stuff out there; every author needs to start their career somewhere, even a pile of burning garbage.

Very awkward.

(1.5 Sterne)

potuc

Mispronunciations of basic words would disrupt the “flow” of the “story,” if the flow and story were worth listening to. While it is an interesting premise, there are many impossibilities. “I was in the army,” suuuuuure you were YOU ARE A TEENAGER!! The author doesn't even read the story he wrote well. There are very simple words he has mispronounced, as well as general stumbling over the text. Would rate higher if the story was worth listening to in any way other than humor value, and that’s only possible because of the horrid reading. It's also very sexual for no apparent reason. Maybe try writing more books, but make them more realistic and less idealized.

Decent audio book

(3 Sterne)

A LibriVox Listener

To tell you the truth, this is not the best audio book i have ever listened to but that dosnt mean it wasn't a good story. This guy put a lot of hard work into this book that to tell you the truth i wish i could do. For this being his first story and him reading the book, he did a great job. The concept of the book is great and if i can find another extinction to this story, i would listen to it. Thank for reading.

A perfect book for people who love b-movies

(5 Sterne)

rob

I love it! EVERYTHING is over the top and whacked out zany. From the narration, to the story, to the way 'dark age' is always a pronounced, to the music, and so on. If you love B-movies, give this a shot. I've listened to it 3 times over the years and it doesn't get old. :). If you don't like B-movies, you probably won't like this.

By: Kevin

I give this story a B-. Simply because there were many unanswered questions. At first I hated the narration, however I got used to it and kinda liked it at the end. Never judge a story on the way it is read. Good job kirk, there were areas of improvement, ...

By: Joshdogg

okay...(breath)....okay. My apologies, but i could not even get past episode 1 man. The sheer mispronunciation is making my head WANT to explode! The story sounds interesting, but it DEFINITELY needs to be remastered. I might've been able to keep going but if you are going to write a story ...

By: John

As much as I like the idea of the story, the audio truly sucks, along with a lot of the character attributes. Let's start by saying this story had SO MUCH potential!! But....My biggest gripe is pronunciation. For 1) it's Hay-dees. Not hayds. 2) Kuh-tah-nuh. Not cat-a-nuh. 3)Rape-yer not rap-ee-err. ...